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Email: Feedback on a school trip — Writing

"Email: Feedback on a school trip" is a Cambridge B2 First Writing practice task (Letter / Email). Cambridge assesses content, communicative achievement, organisation and language on a scale from 0 to 5 per criterion. Plan before you write: identify the target reader, the required register and the number of points you must address. Use accurate vocabulary, varied sentence structures and clear paragraphing that are appropriate to your exam level.

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How should I approach this B2 writing task?

Plan the Letter / Email before writing, address every prompt point, keep the expected register, respect the word limit, and use feedback to improve content, organisation, grammar range, and vocabulary precision.

Task prompt

Your teacher has asked you to email feedback about a recent school trip. Explain what you found most useful, mention one problem and suggest one change for next year's trip.

Word limit: 190 words

Assessment criteria

  • Content: All points addressed with relevant detail and examples.
  • Communicative achievement: Appropriate register and tone for the target reader.
  • Organisation: Clear paragraphing with cohesive devices linking ideas.
  • Language: Wide range of vocabulary and structures used with control and accuracy.